ASK ME ABOUT YOUR SCREENPLAY…

I see so many projects flounder thinking you have to muscle through alone. I can help shine a light on the heart of your film so you’re excited to tackle your next draft! I have a masters degree in story. I’ve written award-winning screenplays. I’ve worked for Disney, Walden Media and Indian Paintbrush reading screenplays and writing coverage. Most importantly, professionals and friends have entrusted me to give them feedback for over a decade. Your project deserves it.

TESTIMONIALS…

‘Lena is the Marina Abramovic of script notes’ - Mimi Jeffries, writer/director Open Roads

‘When I was in the weeds on my script, Lena is who I turned to to spot the issues I wasn't seeing. In working with her, we were able to make the story work, keep my vision in tact, and make it funnier in the process.’ - Jack Newell, writer/director Monuments

‘Lena’s notes are amazing. Her feedback is thoughtful and specific and I always have a better understanding of the strong and weak points of my script after her assessments. With over a decade of narrative training and experience, I have full faith that notes from Lena are ones I can confidently rely on to put me in the right path for my next draft. - Debra Moore Muñoz, writer Mayans MC

NOW THAT I HAVE YOU HOOKED…

I offer myriad consulting services at any stage of your process:

  • STORY FEEDBACK! I’ll give feedback on the structure of your story (from outline to screenplay to cut of your film!) Save yourself time at whatever stage!

  • SENSITIVITY PASS! Want honest feedback about your film’s gender/diversity? I’ll highlight red flags for what you might unintentionally be communicating. No judgement - just perspective!

  • ENGLISH GRAMMAR REVISION! For those who need a native speaker to polish their drafts before sending them out!

    Please email lenar25@gmail.com with questions, for my current rate sheet, and to schedule!

    Let’s shine bright in 2019!