ASK ME ABOUT YOUR SCREENPLAY…
I see so many projects flounder thinking you have to muscle through alone. I can help shine a light on the heart of your film so you’re excited to tackle your next draft! I have a masters degree in story. I’ve written award-winning screenplays. I’ve worked for Disney, Walden Media and Indian Paintbrush reading screenplays and writing coverage. Most importantly, professionals and friends have entrusted me to give them feedback for over a decade. Your project deserves it.
‘Lena is the Marina Abramovic of script notes’ - Mimi Jeffries, writer/director Open Roads
‘When I was in the weeds on my script, Lena is who I turned to to spot the issues I wasn't seeing. In working with her, we were able to make the story work, keep my vision in tact, and make it funnier in the process.’ - Jack Newell, writer/director Monuments
‘Lena’s notes are amazing. Her feedback is thoughtful and specific and I always have a better understanding of the strong and weak points of my script after her assessments. With over a decade of narrative training and experience, I have full faith that notes from Lena are ones I can confidently rely on to put me in the right path for my next draft. - Debra Moore Muñoz, writer Mayans MC
NOW THAT I HAVE YOU HOOKED…
I offer myriad consulting services at any stage of your process:
STORY FEEDBACK! I’ll give feedback on the structure of your story (from outline to screenplay to cut of your film!) Save yourself time at whatever stage!
SENSITIVITY PASS! Want honest feedback about your film’s gender/diversity? I’ll highlight red flags for what you might unintentionally be communicating. No judgement - just perspective!
ENGLISH GRAMMAR REVISION! For those who need a native speaker to polish their drafts before sending them out!
Please email firstname.lastname@example.org with questions, for my current rate sheet, and to schedule!
Let’s shine bright in 2019!